Will someone read my essay?

[HRF112]

<p>I will PM it to you if you would be so kind as to offer advice.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

[OrsonSwells]

<p>I’ll read it. 0_o</p>

[melonbread91]

<p>I’ll take a look too, pm me</p>

[willtransfer]

<p>I will read! PM me please :)</p>

[darkspy123]

<p>PM me, i will give you some advice</p>