<p>I would like someone to read two college essays I've written... they will be used to apply to Yale (Restrictive Early Action), Columbia College, Bowdoin, Colby, and Williams (I realize there's another essay I have to write for Bowdoin, Colby, and Williams)</p>
<p>I don't feel comfortable posting them so maybe through email or PM?</p>
<p>PM it to me i would be glad to help</p>
<p>Thank you... I sent them to you.</p>
<p>Sure, more than happy to help and give some feedback. Send it over.</p>
<p>All right, kMz, I sent them in email since it would have required three private messages.</p>
<p>I would love to read them. PM me.</p>
<p>Just finished my essays so sure I'll give it a look.</p>
<p>Why do I get the feeling people are trying to steal my essays? Does that ever really happen? Sorry if I'm being paranoid, it's nothing personal, but I did work hard on my essays.</p>
<p>Is that because you did not receive feedback or received feedback that you considered perfunctory?</p>
<p>It's because I didn't recieve feedback.</p>
<p>Hey, I just received your essay, I'll give you some feedback tommorow after the SATII Tests.</p>
<p>I'll reply in a short while and I'm NOT trying to steal your essay.</p>
<p>you can PM me. (btw, i got in yale scea last year, so don't worry i won't "steal")</p>
<p>pm me please,</p>