Will someone read my FIRST draft?

College Essays
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<p>It would be great if someone with some experience or anyone actually could give me some feedback on my first crack at writing a college admissions essay. PM me if you want to read it</p>

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<p>or if you want to read it, ask me here and I will PM it to you. this is just a personal statement.</p>

<p>Also, here is a list of colleges I will be applying to so you know what I’m going for:</p>

<p>Stanford (SCEA)
Harvard
UCLA
UCB
USC
University of Michigan
University of Wisconsin
University of Illinois
Northwestern University
Duke University
UNC - Chapel Hill
Cornell
University of Alabama
University of Minnesota</p>

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<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>thanks for volunteering. it’s really raw but be brutal in your criticism</p>

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<p>Hi I’ll read it!</p>

<p>Sent from my VS910 4G using CC</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>can someone read mine??</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>Pm it over!</p>

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<p>I can read it. Just PM me.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! PM me</p>