<p>Hey guys!!!
Would any of you want to critique my essay for a scholarship??? I would love you forever! Just comment here and I will pm you.</p>
<p>thanks</p>
<p>Please! anybody????</p>
<p>i'll bake you a cake if you critique my essay !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!</p>
<p>geez anybody?</p>
<p>Oh you poor thing. Everybody just wants to read application essays and nothing for the money. Well, send it on over ... I'm a Mom and I know those scholaraship essays are important!!!</p>
<p>sent! Thanks so much!</p>