<p>hi--i wrote an essay for william and mary, which i already submitted. however, i'd like to use it for another college (maybe georgetown) with a few alterations. can anyone read it and tell me what they think?</p>
<p>the topic is to tell them about yourself.</p>
<p>I'll read it.</p>
<p>I'll read it :)</p>
<p>would love to</p>
<p>something similar to what I did. i'll give some feedback</p>
<p>ill read it! :)</p>
<p>sure, just pm it over</p>
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<p>Sure i'll read it, PM it to me</p>
<p>I can give you feedback from an adult perspective.</p>