<p>Because writing is not my strong point, I'm desperately in need of some outside advice on my essay. I'll be applying early decision to Penn in just under a month and I don't think my essay is at all up to par. </p>
<p>So, if you aren't a 2014-er and you are willing to be BRUTALLY honest--feel free to rip my essay to pieces :) --then please reply or PM me and I'll send you my essay as soon as possible.</p>
<p>Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>bump… Anyone? </p>
<p>I’d really appreciate it.</p>
<p>Id love to take a look - 2015’er</p>
<p>bump…</p>
<p>Anyone else? Please. : )</p>
<p>why cant 2014-ers help you? i think we’re all clever enough not to plagiarize your essay. and if you’re kinda afraid that after reading your essay ppl will try to “get better” and things like that,well fyi i’ve read essays that tore my heart out but i have no idea hoW to do that good:) you know,we’re all trying to be ourselves anyway.</p>
<p>I can be absolutely honest i dont even know who you are and im not applying to Penn anyway.But im a 2014-er,too bad.If you change your mind then here’s my email <a href="mailto:nakoruru2292■■■■■■.com">nakoruru2292■■■■■■.com</a>.</p>
<p>Goodluck;)</p>
<p>Everything you said is very true nakochan. I’ve already sent you my essay. :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it, PM me.</p>
<p>PM me. Not applying to Penn, but am a senior.</p>
<p>I’m a senior, but definitely not applying to Penn (areas in THAT urban of a setting make me nervous =] ) and I’d love to look at your essay. I always offer to edit my friends’ essays, and they generally tell me I make pretty good comments. I understand not wanting the advice of other 2014-ers, but I just want to offer. Send to <a href="mailto:cmw22@scasd.org">cmw22@scasd.org</a> if you’re interested</p>
<p>Thanks, I’ve sent the essay to all of you guys. Let me know what you think once you read it, please!! :-)</p>
<p>Would you like to do an exchange? I AM a 2014er, but am a good writer all the same!</p>