Will you please give feedback on my essay? New take on an old cliche

[luminalcoin8]

<p>The title says it all!! Thanks much to any takers!</p>

[lmj21682]

<p>I will attempt to help you out! PM me</p>

[jsmathwiz]

<p>I’ll try.</p>

<p>Sent from my SGH-T989 using CC</p>

[greysgirl15]

<p>I’ll take a look</p>

[UrAverageAzn]

<p>I’d be glad to look over it!</p>

[mumof2]

<p>Hi, I will be happy to critique it.</p>

[exuberantpeace]

<p>Yeah, PM me :-)</p>

[Dr2230]

<p>I’ll read it and make edits if necessary. Just PM me.</p>