Will you please read my common app essay?

<p>Would anyone mind reading my common app essay? I'd really like to submit it in a few days so a fast response would be amazing!! I used this prompt: Discuss an accomplishment or event, formal or informal, that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture, community, or family. Thank you so so much!!! :)</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>yes. i’like to read it.</p>