Willing to critique my essay???

College Essays
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Hi there! my common app essay is on the prompt #4. Describe a problem you’ve solved or a problem you’d like to solve. It can be an intellectual challenge, a research query, an ethical dilemma-anything that is of personal importance, no matter the scale. Explain its significance to you and what steps you took or could be taken to identify a solution.

Can anyone please help me critique it? I haven’t really got many advisers around here. any help would be great. thanks!!

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I’d be happy to read, if you can PM your essay to me. My post history will show I’ve already graduated.

3

Sure, I wrote mine on #2 (what we learn from failures)

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Hey, I’d be happy to help. Working on my app too but I’ve already written my essay on prompt #3 so no worries there :slight_smile:

5

for sure, PM me.

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I wrote mine about learning from failures too, although I will inevitably write and rewrite it a few dozen times before I submit it.