<p>if anybody would like to help me out and give comments on one of my short app essays (ony 300 words) it would be mucho appreciated. please just pm me to send you the essay. </p>
<p>i've already sent it to a number of places but plan to send it a couple of more so i want to do some more editing. thanks guys.</p>
<p>if you could get this to me by friday that would be swell.</p>