<p>those graders are so random
first time I took the SAT, I got an 8
second time (my essay was no better!) I got a 12</p>
<p>I went to EssayForum and read some Williams Supplements…a lot of them don’t really relate to a window. Is that acceptable…? :o I always thought Williams’ prompt was actually pretty straight-forward rather than a roundabout way of saying “give us something profound.” I may be reading this too literally though…</p>
<p>You probably read mine, haha. The window doesn’t have to have a significant role in the essay itself. I took the route of using the window as an opportunity to reflect on a scene that had a significant effect on me. Then again, I could be completely wrong, in which case my essay was a total bust.</p>
<p>My essay used the window as a gateway… one sentence mention lol.</p>
<p>No Dramatic, yours had an essay if I remember correctly…Police car’s window, right? I wasn’t talking about yours 
And yeah, mine doesn’t have much of a window mention either.</p>
<p>Same here, kkari. I wrote about a favorite book. I identify with the characters, who are on a kinda crazy quest. Up high, I wrote something like “[Book Title] provides a window into their motivations. But windows work two ways. So examining their motivations allows me to look at my own.” </p>
<p>That’s all the window I mentioned. Though I told what I “saw” through the book, it wasn’t a “sky is blue” kind of description, but more about why the characters did what they did and why it inspired me.</p>
<p>so if i’m at 323 words then this that’s okay? i just wrote it today… sigh… procrastination…</p>
<p>hello everyone~~ =]
mine was… 345 words… i hope that’s okay… sigh
I wrote mine about looking into my future house’s window looking at my wife & kid sleep…
Because being a dad is important to me! (not right NOW, but you know what i mean… =])</p>