Winter Transfer- Personal Statement NEED HELP

<p>Ok, i am planning on applying as a transfer student to UW for Winter Quarter but i really do not understand the personal statement. Can any students who are applying or have been accepted as a transfer student help me out here? Since i am applying as a transfer could i just write a " Why transfer to UW" style essay?</p>

<p>THIS IS THE GUIDELINE- Recommended length: One essay of 750-1000 words addressing all required topics and any optional topics selected.</p>

<p>Academic Elements (required)</p>

<p>Academic History</p>

<p>Tell us about your college career to date, describing your performance, educational path and choices.
Explain any situations that may have had a significant positive or negative impact on your academic progress and/or curricular choices. If you transferred multiple times, had a significant break in your education, or changed career paths, explain.
What are the specific reasons you wish to leave your most recent college/university and/or program of study?
Your Major and/or Career Goals</p>

<p>Tell us about your intended major and career aspirations.
Are you prepared to enter your intended major at this time? If not, describe your plans for preparing for the major. What led you to choose this major? If you are still undecided, why? What type of career are you most likely to pursue after finishing your education?
How will the UW help you attain your academic, career, and/or personal goals?
Personal Elements (required)</p>

<p>Cultural Understanding</p>

<p>Thoughtfully describe the ways in which culture had an impact on your life and what you have learned about yourself and society as a result. How has your own cultural history enriched and/or challenged you?
NOTE: Culture may be defined broadly. Cultural understanding is often drawn from the ethnic background, customs, values, and ideas of a person’s immediate family, community, and/or social environment in which they live.
Educational Challenges / Personal Hardships (recommended if you have something to say on this topic)</p>

<p>Describe any personal or imposed challenges or hardships you have overcome in pursuing your education.
Examples: a serious illness, a disability, first generation in your family to attend college, significant financial hardship or responsibilities associated with balancing work, family and school.
Community or Volunteer Service (recommended if you have something to say on this topic)</p>

<p>Describe your community or volunteer service, including leadership, awards, or increased levels of responsibility.
Experiential Learning (recommended if you have something to say on this topic)</p>

<p>Describe your involvement in research, artistic endeavors, and work (paid or volunteer), as they have contributed to your academic, career or personal goals.</p>

<p>Are you applying into a specific degree program or are you applying as an undeclared major?</p>

<p>What specifically aren’t you understanding about it? I just followed the guidelines you posted.</p>

<p>Just follow the guidelines, but make sure it’s sort of an essay, a story. Not just plain answers to the questions they are asking. Use good transitions and specific relevant examples. After you are done, you can ask people here to review it for you. I would be happy to do that.</p>

<p>Seatac, I’ve been reading these forms for a while and I was wondering if you can look over my personal statement. I’m an accounting major who is not yet applying to Foster yet. If you can look over my essay, I’d really appreciate it.</p>

<p>I would be more than happy to do it for you, but in a week in a half. Right now I’m really busy with school >_< You can send me a PM with it and I will take a look at it after I finish the quarter.</p>

<p>Hey, seatac, I just sent you an email since this website wouldn’t let me send you a pm. Thanks!</p>