<p>I am currently taking a college app. essay writing class at my school, and I just finished one today. I was pretty satisfied with it, but my counselor was worried that it may leave an unfavorable or negative impression of myself with the admissions people. </p>
<p>I was wondering if anyone could take a look at it, and say if I should keep it or start over. Comment if you're interested, or PM me! </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>