Would any parents be kind enough to look my essay?

<p>I have a pretty unique essay that's due November 1st (so soon!) that needs to be edited. I've learned that the parents on this site are the ones with the most to offer, so I'm wondering if any of you parents would be nice enough to look over my essay and give me some feedback.</p>

<p>I'm also giving it to my English teacher, but the more eyes, the better! PLEASE be completely honest - I'd rather hear the truth and fix my essay now (no matter how stressful) than suffer the consequences down the road! Reply here or PM me and I'll PM or email you my essay, whichever works for you.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance, you guys are the best!</p>

<p>By the way, these are the schools I plan on applying to:</p>

<p>UNC-CH (OOS/EA)
Boston College (EA)
U of Miami (EA)
Duke
WUStL
Wake Forest
George Washington
Penn State Schreyer (Honors)
USoCal
William & Mary (OOS)</p>

<p>Any takers?</p>

<p>I've already gotten some great feedback from patsmom, but I would like as much as I can get. I apologize if I'm being annoying, the deadline is just so close and I want to bring this to the first page one last time in case any interested parents missed it. Thanks again!</p>

<p>Okay, PM it to me!</p>