Would anybody mind reviewing my Emory supplement essay?

<p>Hello CC friends!</p>

<p>As the title says, I'm hoping somebody would read over my Emory supplement essay (only 250 words exactly) and tell me what they think?</p>

<p>I want you to be straight-forward and honest with me; don't worry, your feedback, no matter how harsh, won't hurt my feelings. </p>

<p>Thanks in advance to anybody who is willing to read my essay. Just post here saying that you're interested and I'll PM you asap.</p>

<p>I’ll read it, PM me.</p>

<p>If you can wait until Friday, I’ll read it.</p>

<p>I can read over it, PM me.</p>

<p>I will read it.</p>

<p>I’ll read it. PM me.</p>

<p>I’ll read it. PM me.</p>

<p>I’ll send a pm out to you guys later today.</p>

<p>Sorry for the late reply, I’ve been busy with school.</p>

<p>If you’re still looking for someone to read it, I’ll read it. I’m writing the same essay, but for Oxford, so you know I won’t steal it…=P</p>