Would Anyone Be Interested in Reading/Critiquing My Common App Personal Statement?

<p>I'll just PM it to you! </p>

<p>I wrote on the "Describe a fictional character who has had an influence on you and explain that influence." prompt. </p>

<p>It's a little long right now, so any editing thoughts would be great.</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>I will do it.</p>

<p>yeah send it over.</p>

<p>EDIT 1000th POST!</p>

<p>Send it over.</p>

<p>Send it here :)</p>

<p>If you still want a reader, you can send it to me.</p>

<p>Send it over! :)</p>

<p>pm me if you still need someone to read it</p>

<p>if you need help pm me</p>

<p>PM it to me please.</p>