<p>I have written a college essay and the current final draft is approved by one english teacher. There are so many good people out there and I, honestly, would love to have your opinion.</p>
<p>I request someone to read my essay and give me feedback.</p>
<p>If need be, please tear me apart on it, just humiliate the essay, as strict as possible. That will only help me.</p>
<p>I truly appreciate your help.</p>
<p>If anyone is interested, please reply and I will PM it to you.</p>