Would anyone be kind enough to peruse through my essay for ApplyTexas Prompt 2?

<p>Just finished this essay, and while I have given it to a teacher to look over, I''m curious if anyone on collegeconfidential, preferably someone who isnt applying anywhere this year, would offer to give their take on my essay. I don't want to post it online so I'll simply inbox anyone willing to read it. I'd really appreciate it. </p>

<p>You can send to me.Me a parent with Kid in college</p>

<p>Have you received anything from the Texas schools you applied?</p>

<p>I would think you are from Texas since you are using apply Texas, hoping you th best of luck!</p>