Would anyone be willing to critique my essays? For Transfer

Applying to College
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<p>Hey guys,</p>

<p>I'm looking to transfer and I was wondering if someone would be willing to proof read my essay. I would really appreciate it if you guys could give suggestions or check for errors (flow, grammar). I tried posting this in the Essays forum but it doesn't seem to be very active. Please let me know if you can help, I'll PM you a copy.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance</p>

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<p>Bump :( 10characters</p>

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<p>sure, ill read it. Email is <a href="mailto:Obaig89@yahoo.com">Obaig89@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>Okay, sending you an e-mail :)</p>

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<p>Anyone else willing to take a look?</p>

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<p>I got some great feedback already but more opinions would be appreciated</p>

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<p>bmpp bump buum</p>

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<p>sure, send it over
<a href="mailto:k.yori@yahoo.com">k.yori@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>I'd take a look at it and give you some feedback...PM it.</p>