would anyone be willing to critique my personal statement?

<p>preferably if you have a strong writing/english background or have been accepted to med school already!
i need general feedback, brutal honesty, also grammar checks as well..any help at all! i don't have anyone to really help me.
I am looking to submit my AMCAS tomorrow and I would of course be willing to return the favor with writing edits myself.
thank you!</p>

<p>I will be applying to medical school this year. And I would be glad to help you out!</p>