Would anyone be willing to edit my supplement essay for Harvard, Dartmouth and Princeton?

I wrote about how my grandfather’s death when I was fifteen affected me, which is a common topic, but it was an important event in my life. I’m only looking for adults and students already in university to avoid conflicts of interest. And no new users please. Thanks in advance! :slight_smile:

I am willing to read your essays. I am a parent of 3 that successfully navigated the application process. PM me if you would like me to read them.