Hi!! I’ve finished with a first draft of my essay for the common app. I have to bring it into my English class next week, and would REALLY appreciate some help before my peers read it 
I want my essay to be outstanding. I think that it will make or break me in my college admissions process. I want it to set me apart!
If you read/edit it, don’t be afraid to be honest. Any suggestions are completely welcome. Don’t worry about hurting my feelings
Thank you so much! Message if interested
I will!
@Foolsgold345 Great! I will send it to you shortly.
id love to help!!