<p>If you're open-minded, that is--I wrote about a kind of controversial topic, although not in a controversial way. I just want to know if I'm on the right track. I'd also appreciate help cutting it down to size, because it's about a page too long. Thanks!</p>
<p>I can provide you with some criticism. PM it to me, if you want.</p>
<p>I will evaluate as I can.. pm it to me</p>