Would anyone be willing to look over my transfer essay?

I’m a freshman looking to transfer from the University of Massachusetts, and I was just wondering if I could get a fresh set of eyes to look over my essay! I’m hoping for a parent because I don’t want to get into the messy possibility of someone using my essay. I can PM it if you’re willing, thank you in advance!

Before you do send it make sure you verify that it is a parent by reading their threads and replies and that they are a long time CC user. My hubby looks over and fixes lots of student essays, so if you don’t find anyone to do it within a few days let me know and I’ll check with him. Where are you transferring?