Would anyone be willing to read and comment on my common app essay?

<p>I have just finished my essay after a huge number of unsatisfying drafts. However I still don't feel sure about my current version of essay. Could anyone take a look at it and give me some comments? Thank you so much!</p>

<p>Anyone could help? Please!</p>

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<p>penn essay for commonapp?</p>

<p>Yeah sure I’d love to help you out. Pm me.</p>