Would anyone be willing to read/critique a Common App essay?

<p>Hello, I have just finished another draft of my common app essay, and i need some other opinions, preferably from someone who has read alot of college essays. Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>sure i could PM me</p>

<p>bump need some people, preferably not hs seniors.</p>

<p>Hey PM me. I m glad to help</p>

<p>PM me i'll take a look</p>