Would anyone be willing to read my ApplyTexas essays?

I’ve completed essay A and essay B but have yet to write essay C. The prompts are below. If you are willing to critique my writing just PM me.

Essay A: What was the environment you were raised in? Describe your family, home, neighborhood, or community, and explain how it has shaped you as a person.

Essay B: Most students have an identity, an interest, or a talent that defines them in an essential way. Tell us about yourself.

The application opens on Monday so if anyone is available to read my essays that would be awesome.

I can take a look and give comments if you want : )

I would be willing to take a look:)