would anyone be willing to read my college essay?

i think it’s terrible and i feel so self conscious. any help would be very much appreciated.

Why do you not go and check the list of the consolidated essay readers in this site? I think it would be much better if you just find someone who is willing to read others’ essay there and PM it to him/her.

thank you!

I can take a look at it

PLEASE be careful to send it only to adults with established posting histories. You don’t want someone to plagiarize your essay, and have it look like YOURS is the plagiarized version when it hits the plagiarism detectors.

There are people to whom you can send your essay-- I’m not one of them this time of year, but there are others like me here: adults who have been around a while. If you click on my name and check my threads, you’ll see that I’m a math teacher, I have 3 teenage kids and a husband. And that my 17 year old daughter hit “submit” in mid October. So I would have absolutely nothing to gain by stealing your essay. Again, there are others like me. Check the thread on the top of this forum; there’s a link to a list of people willing to read your essays. Check their credentials.

But it’s December. I would get the essay finished ASAP. And your English teacher or guidance counselor might be a better bet at this point.