Would anyone be willing to read my common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi,
I'd love some feedback on the 2nd draft of my common app essay...would anyone be willing to read it? Leave a comment and I'll PM you (feel free to ask help for an essay of yours in return!)
Thanks so much for any help with this!!</p>

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<p>Bump!!
I’d really appreciate anyone’s help with this (:</p>

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<p>Send it over! I’d love to help! Can you look over mine too?</p>

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<p>Thanks for your input!!
I’ve responded to yours (sorry it’s so late, my internet has been down these past few days!)</p>

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<p>read mine and ill read yours! mine is the short answer (:</p>

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<p>id like to read it.</p>

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<p>essay for essay?</p>

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<p>ill read! send it over!</p>

<p>Sent from my iPad using Tapatalk HD</p>

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<p>Thanks so much guys!!
(sorry if I send anyone 2 messages, I lost track of who I PMed already ^^)</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to provide some feedback!</p>

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<p>I’ll read! Will you look over my short answer as well?</p>

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<p>thank you so much everyone!! :D</p>

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<p>I’ll read it as well if you still need some more readers!</p>

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<p>Sure, can you read my Stanford ones in return?</p>

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<p>Thanks everyone, I PM’ed you.
nygiants, PM me your essay, I’ll look at it :D</p>

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<p>i’ll read it!</p>

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<p>Thanks! :smiley: I pm’ed you</p>

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<p>yeah sure, PM me :)</p>