<p>I wrote it on a whim, and I'm proud of it, BUT I'm a little worried that it's just a nicely written story and doesn't show enough about who I am.</p>
<p>Someone told me that I want to ask myself: "What will the admissions committee learn about me from my essay?" </p>
<p>Will they learn about me, or just about what I've experienced? I'm not sure....</p>
<p>THANKS! </p>
<p>I'll PM it to anyone who is willing. Much appreciated.</p>