<p>i read it to myself and the end kinda sounds cheesy :\ lol</p>
<p>thanks in advnce :</p>
<p>you can pm it to me if it’s fun to read. i could use a break.</p>
<p>no pressure.</p>
<p>yeahh sure i’ll read it just PM me. you applying ED?</p>
<p>id love to read/critique it for you</p>
<p>like jroc92, i’m also wondering: are you applying to columbia ED?</p>
<p>in any case, i can read it if you want but send it only if you’re comfortable with another applicant to the class of 2014 reading it.</p>
<p>same as above…I’ve already got my essay done forealz and have edited most of my friends’ essays (we have a nice you edit mine, i edit yours relationship) so if you’re comfortable I’m game 
also, i love the cheese.</p>
<p>you can pm me 
i’ll read it</p>
<p>i’d love to read it</p>
<p>I can help if you would like.</p>
<p>id love to give u some feedback</p>