Would Anyone Care to Read My Common Application Transfer Essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi guys.</p>

<p>I just rewrote my Common App transfer essay and am looking for feedback. I am wondering if clearly states my intentions and goals and if it has a decent amount of personality.</p>

<p>I'll PM anyone who is interested! Thanks!</p>

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<p>Alright send me the essay</p>

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<p>Anyone else? Current college students? Parents? </p>

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<p>Bump…</p>

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<p>PM me?</p>

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I’ll read it

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Anyone else?