Would anyone like to brutally critique my essay?

College Essays
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<p>I don't think it's the most polished and ... I'm not a good writer at all. If anyone would like to read it over and give me feedback and some tips, please post here...and I'll pm you my essay. </p>

<p>I really appreciate anyone who would actually take the time to do this.</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll check it out. Want to swap essays, and I check yours while you check mine? I’m sure any other viewpoint will help both of us.</p>

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<p>I can be very brutal :3</p>

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<p>I’ll give you some feedback.</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll be delighted to give you some critical feedback.</p>

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<p>I’ll definitely be able to help give you some feedback!</p>

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<p>shoot me it in an email: tracymcd22@**********</p>

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<p>My essay is slightly less rough now, so if you would like to read it, please post here and help me out:) looking for critical feedback! </p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

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<p>I’d be willing to critque your essay</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to help you. PM me.</p>

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<p>I can help, Pm ME :D</p>

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<p>ill read it!</p>

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<p>I am willing to read it, maybe give a different view point. PM it to me.</p>

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<p>PM me. I’d be glad to read it.</p>

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<p>Pm me I will look at it</p>

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<p>I can look at it</p>