Would anyone like to critique my essay? Thanks for your help

<p>I have completed my common application essay and would like to receive constructive feedback. Thanks in advance!!!</p>

<p>I will! Can you critique mine in return? If you’re alright with doing that, pm me your essay!</p>

<p>Anyone?? Any help would be greatly appreciation.</p>

<p>Ill take a look.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look! Just send it over with the prompt!</p>

<p>Send it over , i’d like to help</p>