Would anyone like to give me feedback on my common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>Just post here and I'll PM you! :)</p>

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<p>Hi, I would be happy to give you feedback.</p>

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<p>Count me in.</p>

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<p>il take a look!</p>

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<p>sure send it</p>

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<p>send it overrr :D</p>

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<p>Sent! Thanks so much for all of your help!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it as well! Pm me(:</p>

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<p>Sent! 10char</p>

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<p>I’ll gladly read it!</p>

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<p>Hey thanks! Sent!</p>

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<p>I’ll critique yours if you critique mine!</p>

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<p>Hey no problem! I’ll send mine.</p>

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<p>Great, thanks, I’m sending mine</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to take a look!</p>

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<p>Sent! 10char</p>

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<p>I can read over it.</p>

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<p>Hi…I would be happy to read over it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! Send it over!</p>

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<p>Sent! Thanks guys</p>