Would anyone like to help editing my essay, please?

Applying to College
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<p>Hey everyone. I would appreciate if anyone would help edit or critique or even just read and tell me what they think of it. It would really mean a lot to me. Thank you.</p>

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<p>Please????</p>

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<p>I'll read it, PM me. And maybe you could read mine as well?</p>

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<p>i'll take a look at it, private message it to me</p>

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<p>i will read it too</p>

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<p>Ill read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>I'm trying to help my son get started on college essays for his applications. Any help would be greatly appreciated. Does anyone know about essays for schools in Tennesse in particular? He feels pretty strongly about staying around our area. Thank you in advance for any help you might be to us. Sincerely, Mom</p>

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<p>I will read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>me 3,</p>

<p>PM me</p>

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<p>I'll try to offer some feedback.</p>

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<p>i'll read. will you read mine?</p>

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<p>Please PM me. I will read it</p>

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<p>I'll read it. Pm me.</p>

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<p>hey i will take a look.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look too</p>