Would anyone like to polish my personal statement for me?

College Essays
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<p>ill read it. pm me</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>PM meeeeeeee. =)</p>

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<p>I have sent my essay to aisgzdavinci,20LEGEND,88888888.And I will sendit to all of you later.Thanks a bunch:)</p>

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<p>Did you receive my PM or email in which I replied to you?Thank you for sharing time to review my personal statement</p>

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<p>I have sent my personal statement to you two.Thanks a bunch.</p>

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<p>PM me plz. Im interested.</p>

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<p>hey ill read it and offer some suggestions, pm me.</p>

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<p>pm me, thanks. I can give you some advices.</p>