Would anyone like to read and critique my common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>Your honest opinon would be greatly appreciated, don't be afraid to be too hard on me. Thanks in advance.</p>

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<p>bump .</p>

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<p>bump .</p>

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<p>bump .</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to help!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! … send it to me :)</p>

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<p>Sent both. Thanks guys.</p>

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<p>I will be happy to help…</p>

<p>Sent from my GT-I9300 using CC</p>

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<p>bump .</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>Will read and message you as soon as possible!</p>

<p>Sent from my GT-I9300 using CC</p>

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<p>bump .</p>

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<p>bump .</p>

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<p>I will! Check your inbox for mine as well</p>

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<p>Sounds good jdc, ill send it over</p>

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<p>Anyone else?</p>

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<p>Happy to give feedback</p>

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<p>Thanks. Just sent it over.</p>

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<p>Anyone else?</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to help out :)</p>