<p>Hello, my essay is terrible. I need to people to critique me like crazy so my essay gets better. Tell me you'll help and I'll PM you my ****.</p>
<p>Sure, PM it over</p>
<p>Sure, I’ll read it over. And I’m not applying to Harvard so I’ll have a fresh take with it.</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>
<p>i’ll read! PM 
don’t expect me to be… too helpful, though. I am new to this</p>
<p>send it my way</p>
<p>I’ll read it too.</p>
<p>I can help you ~ please send it!</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read it for you :)</p>
<p>I’ll read. pm it.</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>
<p>I can read it as well.</p>
<p>If you’d still like help, PM it over. I’d love to read and critique it :)</p>
<p>pm it!!
10 char</p>
<p>I’d be glad to read and give some feedback. Havard supplement essays must be fantastic!!</p>
<p>Hey i can read it man.</p>
<p>I’d love to give some input as well!</p>
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<p>Why would anyone ask strangers, whose qualifications (and character) are totally unknown, to critique an essay? If it’s good, anyone could steal it. If it’s bad, how do you know the readers are going to recognize this? </p>
<p>I know this is commonly done on this site and elsewhere, but I think it’s pointless at best and foolish at worst. Why not get someone who actually knows you personally and who is qualified to critique your work to read it? Ask an English teacher, a history teacher, your guidance counselor, or yes, even a professional consultant if you have the means to pay for one, to read it for you.</p>
<p>The opinions of 15 strangers, even if they are competent and well-meaning, do not count for more than the opinion of someone who knows you.</p>
<p>Send it over!!!</p>