Would anyone like to read my essay and give me feedback? common app prompt 2

PROMPT: Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what lessons did you learn?
if anyone would like to help me please PM me, thank you!! :slight_smile:

I can read and critique it if you PM me!

I’ll read if you PM me! Also would you mind reading a short essay of mine?

I can read it