Would Anyone Like to Read My Essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi,
I'm a rising senior, and I've written a couple drafts of my common app essay. Now I feel that I'm at a stage where it should be read by some other people. I'm hoping to get people who have experience reading college essays, as I'm applying to some very selective schools and I know that too many cooks in the kitchen spoils the soup. Please tell me if you're at all interested; it's, of course, a very short essay, considering the regulations that the common app sets.
Thank you so much in advance!</p>

<p>-dancingtocollege</p>

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<p>Please, I want it picked apart and for you to be as critical as possible! </p>

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<p>ill help you if you help me :)</p>

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<p>I’ll help you and ask for nothing in return!</p>

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<p>I would be willing to give advice too</p>

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<p>I’d be willing to help!!</p>

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<p>Pm I’ll help you if you help me? :slight_smile: </p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you want :)</p>