Would anyone like to read my UC Essay?

College Essays
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<p>I'm the kind of essay writer that has a hard time editing. If I spend too long a time reading my own essay I am less prone to find mistakes. And knowing myself and my own message, I tend to forget about logical errors in my essay and leave too much room for assumption.</p>

<p>It'd be great if some people can review my essay and give me some feedback. I only wrote one for the second UC prompt:</p>

<p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

<p>If anyone's interested in reading this, I can send you a PM. Just let me know [:</p>

<p>Thanks in advance. Love this community.</p>

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<p>Sweet, I’ll send it to you as a private message.</p>

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<p>Also, if anyone wants me to read their UC essay for prompt number two I’d love to do that as well. [:</p>

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<p>Bump! haha</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! send me a PM
but could you read mine also?</p>

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<p>Hey I can help.
PM it over</p>

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<p>Shleyaay: Yes, I can. Just reply with your essay in the PM.</p>

<p>Bentley8: Awesome, thanks! I’ll send you the PM!</p>

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<p>Id like to help
PM me?</p>

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<p>Hi Chango :D</p>