Would anyone like to review/edit/give really harsh commentary my supplemental essay?

College Essays
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<p>It's pretty rough right now.
Still though, be as horrible and detailed as possible please :]</p>

2

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

3

<p>Thanks, pmed it to you</p>

4

<p>I’ll read it too, if you’ll read mine.</p>

5

<p>I’ll read it and give you my honest opinion on it! PM me!</p>