Would anyone look over my Why Northwestern essay

<p>There are many things that I like about Northwestern so my approach was to talk about all of them, but I don't want the essay to be weaker because of that :/</p>

<p>Any help would be greatly appreciated!</p>

<p>I will! Pm it to me</p>

<p>Thank you! I just have to get to 15 posts before I can pm so here goes</p>

<p>And post #15</p>

<p>Why not, I’ll have a look at it</p>