Would anyone mind looking over my UC essay?

<p>I need someone to help me revise/edit and give me ideas on how I should change things for the UC essay Prompt #1.</p>

<p>Thanks. =]</p>

<p>just pmed you</p>

<p>replied =]</p>

<p>I will have a look if you want…</p>

<p>I’d take a look : )</p>

<p>@noratoledo: Wow. 9 posts from 10:47 to 11:15 in multiple forums, all saying the same thing. I guess the graduate program isn’t working out too well if you have to be a shill for essay services (unless, of course, they are your services). If that’s the case, I suggest that you fire your marketing director.</p>