Would anyone mind readin my letter?

<p>I am writing a letter to Penn after gettin deferred. I was wondering if anyone would mind reading it over and offering any suggestions. Preferably by those already in college or those who have themselves sent in a similar letter.</p>

<p>I think it may be a bit too late...they should have been in by the end of January</p>

<p>Yep...decisions are already being made. Your letter is going to come in way too late to have any sort of positive effect.</p>