Would anyone mind reading my 250 word essay?

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<p>I've written my 250 word essay and I've sort of taken a different approach to it so I wanted some advice/opinions. </p>

<p>I still need to clarify it a bit, but before I do that I just wanted some opinions.</p>

<p>I'm pretty hesitant giving it to people that I don't know..so I prefer parents/people not applying for this year and just a couple of people or maybe even one.</p>

<p>THANKS!
=)</p>

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<p>(I actually don't mind THAT much if it's a senior, but naturally someone otherwise would be preferred more)</p>

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<p>...Please?</p>

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<p>ill read it.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look at it if you still need help.</p>