Would Anyone Mind Reading My Common App Essay?

<p>Hi guys! This is the second essay that I've written. I'm having trouble deciding which one represents me the best. </p>

<p>This is a very rough draft, so if I would really appreciate if someone would be interested.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll read it and give you feedback ASAP. PM it to me</p>

<p>I’ll read it too if you want just PM it to me</p>

<p>yeah same, just PM it</p>

<p>Id be happy to read it, PM me!</p>