<p>I'm applying to Mt. Holyoke [ Mount</a> Holyoke College, South Hadley, Massachusetts ] in the spring, and I have to write a response on why I want to attend. I didn't see a word length, so it's about 1,000 words long right now. There are no other essays to write, so I'm trying to include interesting things about myself in it too. My tactic, pretty much, is to sell them on their own school while selling myself. A difficult task!</p>
<p>yea sure ill read/give feedback</p>
<p>I would love to read your essay and I’ll do my best to give you my honest feedback.</p>
<p>Bump . . … . .</p>