<p>I'm trying to get into Florida Sate University's Legal Scholars program and I'm wrting a personal statement. </p>
<p>I'm looking for some harsh criticism....I really want to be accepted!</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>I’m not looking for anyone who knows about FSU’s legal scholars program necessarily…I just someone who can critique my sentence flow, word choice, grammar, etc.</p>
<p>send it to me privately, i’ll be glad to look.</p>
<p>Send it over.</p>